I haven’t tried this in a long time – the last story I published in part on this blog was never competed (“Peter’s Problem” just rambles on and on) and never got any opinions on pieces fo the story I DID publish.
At any rate, I told people about this story in an earlier entry… There is no title to it as it stands right now and it’s just a few hundred words… Let me know what you think if you think anything about it… Just click on more to view it.
Dontrell and Monica stood on the tiptoes of their flip-flop clad feet and peered into the white minivan. They had been on their way to the community pool to help beat the mid-summer heat when they were compelled to look in ominous white vehicle that was owned by a white lady who lived nearby. The car was parked just across the street from their own apartment and along the path to the pool. It was impossible for them not to look, knowing the white woman had big dogs that she put in there. They had seen her and the animals before and both intimidated them. There were a couple of large cages in the back of the minivan, where the woman sometimes put the dogs before she drove off to where ever white women go to.
â€œYaâ€™ll better watch out,â€ their momâ€™s boyfriend, Barry, spoke from behind them. â€œShe gonnaâ€™ end up cominâ€™ out and catchinâ€™ you!â€ He was standing close to their apartment building and hauling a couple of trash bags in his arms. The kids liked Barry with his music and modified car that had a really loud speakers and could bounce too! He wore gold chains and looked like a rapper from TV.
â€œYaâ€™ll see those cages in there?â€ Barry asked, putting down his trash bags for a moment and approaching the kids. The cages had specifically caught their attention because of how big they were. â€œYaâ€™ll look at them real good â€˜cause when she catches you sheâ€™s gonnaâ€™ put your asses in those cages and let the dogs eat you!â€
The kids looked at Barry in disbelief. Would the woman really do that to them? Feed them to those monster hounds? Barry slowly nodded as if to stress the point before picking up the trash bags again and continuing on his trek to the trash bin. He let out a laugh on the way but the children didnâ€™t hear him â€“ they were too preoccupied on the frightening reality that stood before them.
Ever since Dontrell and Monica watched their friend Alisha be mauled by her family pit bull a few months earlier, the kids had been absolutely terrified of dogs. It could be their next-door neighbor, Mrs. Jackson, and her little terrier. It could also be any one of the neighborhoods other pit bulls, and there were many of them. Whatever size it was, whatever breed it was, the kids were certain the animal was ready to snap at them.
And of course some white ladyâ€™s dogs have got to be trained to go after the black folk, the kids thought. She was one of the only non-black people that lived in the apartment complex, and they had no idea why she didnâ€™t live with the rest of her people and leave their neighborhood alone.
She seemed scary to them just because she was so alien â€“ white people werenâ€™t common in their community. Her hair was a deep red and she barely smiled. She wore glasses and was always bringing around other strange white folks: a scrawny man who walked around with the help of a stick, and there was another woman who stayed with her for a while who had a scab on one of her eyes. Maybe they were her friends but they were all so freaky!
The dogs that the lady had – they looked like the kind they had seen when Barry took them and their mom to the racetrack once in a while. The big, sleek, thin dogs would chase a mechanical rabbit around a track and they were hellaâ€™ quick too! That was another reason why the kids were so taken aback of the white womanâ€™s dogs â€“ they knew that they were too fast not to catch them!
It was terribly hot, but Dontrell and Monica had forgotten the pool for the moment, as they stood affixed to their fears.
In their silence, they imagined being locked in the cages and having those big dogs closing in on them. They would be slobbering and panting, barking and growling and showing their viciousness before closing in on the kill. It would be exactly like what happened to Alisha â€“ having her skin ripped off and being made dead… There would be no escape. Theyâ€™d scream and maybe Barry would try to save them from that mad white bitchâ€™s dogs? Or maybe heâ€™d let them die so he could have their mother to hiâ€™self? He always wanted private time with her anyway and was always throwing them out of the apartment.
A voice from behind them broke the anxious silence, “Could you kindly not get handprints on my windows?â€
It was the white lady â€“ standing not 3 yards from them. Dontrell and Monica looked at each other and panicked. They heard not a word of what the woman said but had all of their fantasies come to life! Barry said sheâ€™d feed them to the dogs! Barry said sheâ€™d lock them in the cages before she did it! She was here now and at any moment now her dogs would be chasing after them down in frenzy!
They screamed and took off for the pool without looking back. If they had, they would have noticed the white lady watching them with an expression of bewilderment. The threat was only in their minds, the perception of imminent doom was just an innocent childhood misconception; one whose impression will not likely fade with away